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Post by owtopia on Oct 26, 2007 13:39:41 GMT -5
A new story I thought up. I will write more when I have time.  |
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Post by Archaix on Oct 26, 2007 14:52:55 GMT -5
I like it! |
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Post by IronWolves on Oct 26, 2007 22:34:04 GMT -5
i like how you used you country in it like the setting ;D
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Post by IronWolves on Oct 26, 2007 22:35:14 GMT -5
[glow=black,2,300][shadow=red,left,300]The Rock 2: Revenge of the Pebble[/shadow][/glow]
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Post by Kardas on Oct 27, 2007 6:46:22 GMT -5
You guys are getting ahead of yourself. Let Owtopia FINISH the story, THEN start flooding this place with potential sequals
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Post by Archaix on Oct 27, 2007 7:29:06 GMT -5
It seems I have popularized the use of the short story! My work here is done.  |
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Post by Kardas on Oct 27, 2007 7:54:39 GMT -5
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Post by Archaix on Oct 27, 2007 8:23:02 GMT -5
I might make another one sometime. But not in the near future.  |
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Post by IronWolves on Oct 27, 2007 9:11:20 GMT -5
fine i will wait to begin thinking of sequal titles
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Post by bobslands on Oct 27, 2007 9:22:23 GMT -5
cool title
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Post by IronWolves on Nov 2, 2007 20:20:52 GMT -5
yeah are you goin to continue the story?
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Post by owtopia on Nov 3, 2007 9:45:36 GMT -5
yeah, when I have time. probably tomorrow or on monday.
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Post by Casinecro on Nov 3, 2007 14:53:16 GMT -5
It's very good, but I think you skipped the part where Randy becomes the leader of the rebels. And the "Chapters" should be longer, as Primus once told me for a publication I accidently made in the General forums.
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Post by Archaix on Nov 3, 2007 14:56:59 GMT -5
I like the message. |
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Post by Casinecro on Nov 3, 2007 16:49:11 GMT -5
What's the message?
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Post by IronWolves on Nov 3, 2007 21:08:42 GMT -5
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Post by Kazzerland on Nov 3, 2007 21:13:40 GMT -5
It's pretty good, but maybe you should fill in some details between those sudden time skips.  |
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Post by Archaix on Nov 4, 2007 7:39:25 GMT -5
Communism is evil :-/and royalty is good. |
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Post by IronWolves on Nov 16, 2007 20:29:48 GMT -5
ok in the last chapter "the rock is born" the rock dies. lol
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Post by owtopia on Nov 17, 2007 18:36:47 GMT -5
It's not over yet. There is still one more chapter and then the prolouge.
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