Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 10:34:46 GMT -5
Kalecktonian Wars
Book 1: The Sacrifice
Chapter 1: The Marine
Characters as they come up
Sin: A beautiful 14 year old girl who's mother has been tricked into letting her daughter date and one day marry a 23 year old marine. 5"6", sharp green eyes, extremely beautiful. Baltija
Brady: 6"3", 200 pounds, Buzz cut, in the Order of the Blue Knights and Leader of the Royal Guard of her Majesty Kelena. Kaleckton
Kelena: 6"0" 130 pounds, stunning, 12 years of age (very tall for her age) Queen of the Federation of Kaleckton and the Ne-mar Continent. Kaleckton
Mike: 23 year old, 6"5" 230 pound marine. Baltija Marine General.
Mom: Sins mother. Baltija
I shall be adding this as much as I can throughout the day, its a new project I'm starting and I need opinions and help to get the first chapter perfect and interesting. I tend to not put in enough details so I will be working on that all day long.
This is where its going to go.
"Judgment has been placed upon you Aid-en, you have gone against the gods and you shall pay."
"What I did was to create a new way of life. A life with compassion and love, a life without perfection."
"What you did was to create a monster, and that monster looks like us!"
"Your judgment is wrong Fav."
"I hope your right Aid-en, for your life will be forfeit if your wrong."
"Boo."
"What the heck mom." I saw my beautiful mother making her funny voices and weird faces as though I was still a baby. God can she be so annoying at times. pushing her off my bed was not going to be easy, and convincing her to get out of my room was going to be impossible.But as I was going to pick up a shoe and start throwing my mom stopped me with her hand.
"Dear, I'm really sorry but you need to know this. Mike sent a messenger that we are to expect him within the hour." My heart shattered as she continued on with those words. Mike was a 23 year old marine who has already raped me 3 times and if hes coming here hes going to rape me yet again. No matter how much I plea or want to leave my mother would not leave everything she knew for me. I have to find a way out myself or be trapped for all of eternity by the clutches of a rapist.
"Mom"
"I know, I've called the school and they said that you have been dismissed from school on Marine Orders. I'm sorry." Thats when I cried. Today was suppose to be my first day of school and we were just able to afford it for me. Now I won't be going and asking for a refund would be a joke in the school ears. I am stuck permanently in a marine arms.
"Mom leave."
"Okay dear." She left very quickly knowing that my wrath was about to fly. But instead of attacking everyone in sight I just broke down into tears crying my eyes out till I fell asleep again knowing that Mike would not care if I was awake or not.
As I bowed down to my Queen she stopped me and for a second i was shocked not understanding what was going on.
"Brady I have ordered you here today for a certain reason."
"Ma'am I shall follow your words to the end of time." Was my repeated answer.
"Well don't Brady." Looking up I was shocked by her words. Saying that went against all the codes of the Federation of Kaleckton and was considered treason by all counts. "I called you here today not as a soldier in my Royal Guard but as a Blue Knight and a man of my dreams."
Freezing was my first reaction, then deep freezing was my second and third reaction. The Blue Knights were an old order of Rebellion against the Republic of Kaleckton that happened only 10 years ago. At that time I was 10 years old but a General in the Main Guard. The reason I survived was because I was the youngest in the Order and the only one not found to be guilty of treason. How my Queen found out about what her mother and father did and allowed shocked me to my core since she was barely 2 years old at the time. All I said was "I'm sorry for lying to you my queen."
"I know most of the facts Brady but I do not care about that. My 89 year old husband died, and I am perfectly happy that he died cause he was a tyrant. I plan on making changes but first I need a commander of all the armies. We have known you to be the last of your kind in Kaleckton for a long time now and I have watched you carefully."
All I did was stare into my queens eyes without a single blink. Being a 12 year old queen she was the first to still be a virgin by this time since the queens tend to go for a man they most often dream about no matter what he is like. "I need you Brady and I have loved you and your strength for a long time now. If you decline it would be very painful to me but you may if you wish."
I have no weapon, she had no weapon, but her 150 guards in this room and lots of pointy shiny things and will use it for the best interest of the queen. So I knew perfectly well whats going to happen if I decline even if the queen tells her guard to let me go. There is no other choice. "Yes I will be your husband."
Smelling the world around me I began to wonder why the pathetic world was trying to live without us. No one in their right mind would disobey the might of the Baltijan Marines. We can beat the best in the world and laugh at the might of the big. Having over 60 million soldiers supplied me with this confidence. and the 10 million Immortals are unbeatable. Each nation on this continent will fear the day they fought with evil.
I was pondering this and many things to come as I got closer to the Virgins house. Asking my colonel I was reminded that the girls name was sin and i laugh. I forgot that I was the one reason she is no longer a virgin and I love it. She was just another girl who I can control and I always control things no matter what happens. While thinking I looked up an saw that her mother was waiting nervously. Putting the spell on her to sign the spell bound contract was easy, making her doing something foolish will be harder.
Her mother was quite beautiful herself, and maybe when I get tired with sin I'll force her a few times just to keep things fresh. although all I have to do is go into a house to get any girl I want. Their pathetic little house with 3 rooms just seemed to be garbage. "I hope that Sin is awak."
"I'm sorry sir she is asleep."
"Well then I will handle things." I quickly got off the horse and ran briskly into the main room. Then i turned left and opened sins room. There she was, beautiful as ever, crying as a baby. Well I know how to handle girls like that and I close the door to do my sin.
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Book 1: The Sacrifice
Chapter 1: The Marine
Characters as they come up
Sin: A beautiful 14 year old girl who's mother has been tricked into letting her daughter date and one day marry a 23 year old marine. 5"6", sharp green eyes, extremely beautiful. Baltija
Brady: 6"3", 200 pounds, Buzz cut, in the Order of the Blue Knights and Leader of the Royal Guard of her Majesty Kelena. Kaleckton
Kelena: 6"0" 130 pounds, stunning, 12 years of age (very tall for her age) Queen of the Federation of Kaleckton and the Ne-mar Continent. Kaleckton
Mike: 23 year old, 6"5" 230 pound marine. Baltija Marine General.
Mom: Sins mother. Baltija
I shall be adding this as much as I can throughout the day, its a new project I'm starting and I need opinions and help to get the first chapter perfect and interesting. I tend to not put in enough details so I will be working on that all day long.
This is where its going to go.
"Judgment has been placed upon you Aid-en, you have gone against the gods and you shall pay."
"What I did was to create a new way of life. A life with compassion and love, a life without perfection."
"What you did was to create a monster, and that monster looks like us!"
"Your judgment is wrong Fav."
"I hope your right Aid-en, for your life will be forfeit if your wrong."
"Boo."
"What the heck mom." I saw my beautiful mother making her funny voices and weird faces as though I was still a baby. God can she be so annoying at times. pushing her off my bed was not going to be easy, and convincing her to get out of my room was going to be impossible.But as I was going to pick up a shoe and start throwing my mom stopped me with her hand.
"Dear, I'm really sorry but you need to know this. Mike sent a messenger that we are to expect him within the hour." My heart shattered as she continued on with those words. Mike was a 23 year old marine who has already raped me 3 times and if hes coming here hes going to rape me yet again. No matter how much I plea or want to leave my mother would not leave everything she knew for me. I have to find a way out myself or be trapped for all of eternity by the clutches of a rapist.
"Mom"
"I know, I've called the school and they said that you have been dismissed from school on Marine Orders. I'm sorry." Thats when I cried. Today was suppose to be my first day of school and we were just able to afford it for me. Now I won't be going and asking for a refund would be a joke in the school ears. I am stuck permanently in a marine arms.
"Mom leave."
"Okay dear." She left very quickly knowing that my wrath was about to fly. But instead of attacking everyone in sight I just broke down into tears crying my eyes out till I fell asleep again knowing that Mike would not care if I was awake or not.
As I bowed down to my Queen she stopped me and for a second i was shocked not understanding what was going on.
"Brady I have ordered you here today for a certain reason."
"Ma'am I shall follow your words to the end of time." Was my repeated answer.
"Well don't Brady." Looking up I was shocked by her words. Saying that went against all the codes of the Federation of Kaleckton and was considered treason by all counts. "I called you here today not as a soldier in my Royal Guard but as a Blue Knight and a man of my dreams."
Freezing was my first reaction, then deep freezing was my second and third reaction. The Blue Knights were an old order of Rebellion against the Republic of Kaleckton that happened only 10 years ago. At that time I was 10 years old but a General in the Main Guard. The reason I survived was because I was the youngest in the Order and the only one not found to be guilty of treason. How my Queen found out about what her mother and father did and allowed shocked me to my core since she was barely 2 years old at the time. All I said was "I'm sorry for lying to you my queen."
"I know most of the facts Brady but I do not care about that. My 89 year old husband died, and I am perfectly happy that he died cause he was a tyrant. I plan on making changes but first I need a commander of all the armies. We have known you to be the last of your kind in Kaleckton for a long time now and I have watched you carefully."
All I did was stare into my queens eyes without a single blink. Being a 12 year old queen she was the first to still be a virgin by this time since the queens tend to go for a man they most often dream about no matter what he is like. "I need you Brady and I have loved you and your strength for a long time now. If you decline it would be very painful to me but you may if you wish."
I have no weapon, she had no weapon, but her 150 guards in this room and lots of pointy shiny things and will use it for the best interest of the queen. So I knew perfectly well whats going to happen if I decline even if the queen tells her guard to let me go. There is no other choice. "Yes I will be your husband."
Smelling the world around me I began to wonder why the pathetic world was trying to live without us. No one in their right mind would disobey the might of the Baltijan Marines. We can beat the best in the world and laugh at the might of the big. Having over 60 million soldiers supplied me with this confidence. and the 10 million Immortals are unbeatable. Each nation on this continent will fear the day they fought with evil.
I was pondering this and many things to come as I got closer to the Virgins house. Asking my colonel I was reminded that the girls name was sin and i laugh. I forgot that I was the one reason she is no longer a virgin and I love it. She was just another girl who I can control and I always control things no matter what happens. While thinking I looked up an saw that her mother was waiting nervously. Putting the spell on her to sign the spell bound contract was easy, making her doing something foolish will be harder.
Her mother was quite beautiful herself, and maybe when I get tired with sin I'll force her a few times just to keep things fresh. although all I have to do is go into a house to get any girl I want. Their pathetic little house with 3 rooms just seemed to be garbage. "I hope that Sin is awak."
"I'm sorry sir she is asleep."
"Well then I will handle things." I quickly got off the horse and ran briskly into the main room. Then i turned left and opened sins room. There she was, beautiful as ever, crying as a baby. Well I know how to handle girls like that and I close the door to do my sin.
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