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Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 10:35:09 GMT -5
Kalecktonian Wars
Book 1: The Sacrifice
Chapter 1: The Marine
I shall be adding this as much as I can throughout the day, its a new project I'm starting and I need opinions and help to get the first chapter perfect and interesting. I tend to not put in enough details so I will be working on that all day long.
Put your comments here
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Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 11:05:57 GMT -5
Got a large part of the chapter up, I will stop now and see the reactions then later I'll add more of the chapter into it.
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Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 11:16:16 GMT -5
and as a reminder its only a first rough draft
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Aug 8, 2007 11:38:38 GMT -5
Not bad, although i don't really like this genre.
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Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 11:39:09 GMT -5
lol, can u guess what kind of genre its going to be?
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Aug 8, 2007 11:48:20 GMT -5
maybe i was inaccurate. I don't like when i can't link at least part of a story to real things.Like places, timeframe,etc. But that's only my taste.
And what's so funny?
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Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 11:54:11 GMT -5
Cause the next things I'll put up in a few hours will have trolls, orcs, dragons, goblins, and will tell you that its this planets medieval time.
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Aug 8, 2007 11:57:21 GMT -5
(then my guess on the genre was quite accurate  ) Anyway, excellent, keep it up.Just not my style  |
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Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 12:19:21 GMT -5
Lol. okie dokie, though i think i'm not too bad of a writer
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Post by kaleckton on Aug 8, 2007 14:24:00 GMT -5
Chapter one is completed, I'll do some changes later espicially grammer and spelling just warn me if you see something.
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Post by Republicas Gloria on Aug 15, 2007 20:58:12 GMT -5
How close to the modernday RP is the story?
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