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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 2:29:15 GMT -5
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Post by Kardas on Jun 11, 2007 3:01:29 GMT -5
Does this come AFTER Archaix got shot and Kardas and his Dragon took off to where-ever Auto is?
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 3:11:06 GMT -5
Yep. This is where the story begins.... but i'm not sure....maybe Archaix didn't die....who knows?  |
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Post by Archaix on Jun 11, 2007 6:24:10 GMT -5
According to the initial storyline Debro and I get shot in the head by penguin assassins...but why?! Stay tuned...
The penguin ninja padded into the room cautiously. There was nothing to be heard except the soft rattling of the sparse rain on the iron roof. In the distance the cars of the motorway, oblivious to the drama that was yet to unfold, traversed across the landscape.
The barn was empty, the penguin ninja knew this already. Shortly before entering he had patrolled the circumference of the building, peered inside -nothing. He couldn't even see any tire-tracks on the driveway. Automaticz must be late, he reasoned.
"How good of you to drop by, Sam." Said Automaticz. He was standing in the corner of the room, cocktail glass in hand, large cumbersome bagpipe in the other. The tone of voice was all wrong: it was too calm, too patient...
"How did you get there?" Asked Sam the penguin ninja, genuinely surprised.
"That is of no relevance, friend," He replied. "But what is relevant, is this -" He took out a small, brown package from the top pocket of his even jacket.
"What's that?"
"An explosive. Powerful enough to destroy the whole of Westminster in a single detonation."
"But...that's insane!" Sam cried. "You can't destroy Parliament! That's not what we agreed!"
"Wrong on two points, I'm afraid. I'm not insane, and believe me when I say that Parliament...Parliament is over for this quarter."
"But I thought we were only going to take out the Prime Minister! Hundreds of innocents will be killed!"
"Correction: hundreds of politicians will be killed. And then nothing will stand in the way of me and the Emerald!"
Sam, horrified, took a step back.
"No, I have to stop this. I have done enough damage as it is!"
"I see. Then you have become...dispensable."
Sam didn't have time to dodge the bullet; the gun was drawn before he could even shout. And as his body slammed against the dirty, unwashed floor, a silent curse was raised from his beak. Sam was dead.
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 8:05:29 GMT -5
Nice!
So, i'll edit our "book"....i'll include your prev sections, and the one of Kardas.
Everybody, plz post new sections here!
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Post by Archaix on Jun 11, 2007 10:39:50 GMT -5
The last line of the bit where Kardas rescues me is the best line ever.
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 11:26:56 GMT -5
you mean, weird? Plz correct the grammar if it was wrong.... maybe it wasn't a great idea to be the editor...  |
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Post by Kardas on Jun 11, 2007 11:37:22 GMT -5
Don't ask why, but if I enter a building of some sort, I want to crash through the roof (Dragon's exhaustion), of course both of us drop onto the ground like rocks but we survive. Does that maybe help things? You can have me stand up, play dead, be KO'd though.
EDIT: A little bit on the Kardas Dragon- it's about 3m tall, and continuously generates concussive force inside its body, which has to be released through the mouth periodically, or it'll explode
Wonder how Nibu, Deutschgarten and the others can be fit in
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Post by deutschgarten on Jun 11, 2007 11:41:38 GMT -5
OMG! This story is so exciting!
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 11:52:02 GMT -5
Don't ask why, but if I enter a building of some sort, I want to crash through the roof (Dragon's exhaustion), of course both of us drop onto the ground like rocks but we survive. Does that maybe help things?  you mean, change the main door blasting thing...  |
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Post by Kardas on Jun 11, 2007 11:54:42 GMT -5
no, I mean crash through a roof LATER in the story (through Parliament for example)
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 12:01:14 GMT -5
oh, i see now. sry.
Can you write a chapter about the chase? Automaticz has killed Sam, but you're tailing him with your dragon..
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Post by Kardas on Jun 11, 2007 12:02:50 GMT -5
Worth a try, but I have to go now (very late here)
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Post by His Holiness King Of Penguins on Jun 11, 2007 12:30:58 GMT -5
why must i kill a penguin  Put a bit in about Scottish Idependence  i can't wait to hear what happens next |
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 12:36:19 GMT -5
why must i kill a penguin ask the author ;D in fact you can write a section too...i'll include it in the "book". Remember: everybody can be the writer of this. |
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Post by His Holiness King Of Penguins on Jun 11, 2007 13:01:51 GMT -5
Ok, here it goes (feel free to edit it because i really can't write stories i just have ideas)
"Automaticz walked up to the body of his once loyal ninja penguin Sam, he took Sam's body outside with a tear in his eye, he burried Sam's body in his favourite spot in the forest. Automaticz would never usually shoot one of his loyal penguins but this time it was different, you see Automaticz knew that Sam was a spy ever since day one but he kept Sam because he beleived that Sam might change his mind and become totally loyal to Automaticz, but he didn't so what had to be done had to be done. Automaticz went into his mafia like car and drove off into the night with only his radio on and some crows crowing, he arrived at Sam's house and used Sam's ID Card that he took of his body earlier, he entered the darkened hall and turned on the light. Automaticz searched for the documents that Sam was about to send to his master in parliment, yes parliment thats why he didn't want to parliment blown up. Finally after hours of searching an 4 cups of coffee Automaticz found the safe that had the documents, Automaticz got out some explosives and planted them on the safe. After the explosion the safe door opened and Automaticz put the documents marked TOP SECRET into his dark brown cloak. He once more drove off into the night in his car but this time he saw a car in his car mirror, he thought nothing of it until the car came slowly closer and closer and then......." I have gave someone a starting point to carry on the story thats why there is a then...
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Post by Robespierre - P.R. of Debro on Jun 11, 2007 13:20:30 GMT -5
So sam was a traitor. That gave me an idea....
ok, i'll update it.
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Post by Archaix on Jun 11, 2007 13:24:37 GMT -5
you mean, weird? Plz correct the grammar if it was wrong.... maybe it wasn't a great idea to be the editor... No no, you're doing a good job. why must i kill a penguin Put a bit in about Scottish Idependence i can't wait to hear what happens next 1. You killed a penguins because you're a man of few morals and many vices. 2. You'll repeal the Act of Union 1707 over my dead body. 3. Granted! I'll post more later when it isn't hot. |
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Post by His Holiness King Of Penguins on Jun 11, 2007 13:44:22 GMT -5
1707, 2007 time for change England is just greedy an is making up lies about Scottish independence because we have oil and england doesn't Scotland has much more culture than England and we could promote our tourisim much more if we were independence England's Empire fell apart after WW11 but it managed to keep the UK, the most of Ireland left and now it's Scotands turn. |
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Post by Archaix on Jun 11, 2007 13:50:53 GMT -5
WORLD WAR ELEVEN?!
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" -Archaix
you mean, change the main door blasting thing... 
Put a bit in about Scottish Idependence 
i can't wait to hear what happens next